Cane

• jtk

• Jun 17, 2018

IMO burning in all corners would focus attention and help with the blank sky.

 

• bsdunek

• Jun 17, 2018

jtk is right. I do. like the composition.

 

• awty

• Jun 17, 2018

@jtk @bsdunek Thanks for the comments. The picture was as much about the strong midday light as anything, is how I saw it, maybe doesnt work.

 

• jtk

• Jun 17, 2018

I didn't say it doesn't work. It does look sun-blasted (I know about that kind of light here in New Mexico). Seems a potential work in progress.

 

• awty

• Jun 17, 2018

@jtk Should of called it 40c degrees in the shade. Yes everything I do is a work in progress, its all about the journey.

 

• awty

• Jun 17, 2018

@jtk John to answer your question better, to me the shed is almost withering in the strong light. I burnt in the track, more to the right slightly. It lacks direction. A piece of cane in the foreground bent at the same angle, donno. I need to concentrate more when taken the photo on the final picture.