Boulder in creek
tony lockerbie

Boulder in creek

Nice shiny rock in Mumbulla creek.
Location
Mumbulla mountain, S.E. New South Wales, Australia
Equipment Used
Linhof Tech. 150mm Sironar N
Exposure
3 x 1/4 sec. @ F22
Film & Developer
APX100, Rodinal 1:25
Paper & Developer
Ilford MC Fibre, D72
Lens Filter
none
Tony, have you considered cropping the top 2/3 off to make it more abstract? The tonality, detail etc are wonderful in the lower portion but I feel the extra 'reference' material in the top 2/3 adds little (pers opinion). There is a real strong abstract in there.
Good work, and thanks for posting
Phill
 
I can scroll the screen down to crop as Phill suggested and it does seem eliminate the elements that give it scale. It could be a 5 inch rock or a 500 foot one. I am not too good with abstracts but this is what I see. I like it.

--John
 
That should read 2/5 s not 2/3 :smile:
 
Multiple 1/4 second exposures of fast moving water has now officially been added to my quiver of tricks and techniques.

THANKS!!!

Murray
 

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