Blackweb

Don't like it because here upper arm part looks much to wide, did you use a strong W lens?

I agree that the shoulder area looks too accentuated and the crop of the wrist and hand makes it even more awkward for me. Had she not leaned forward and pressed her weight onto that arm the shoulder would have slimmed down. She could have wrapped her arm under her breast and across the waist, framing the breast and making it more of a focal point as well as softening the lines.

In the legs shot, I find the composition interesting, but the sole of her shoe is getting a bit too much of my attention. I think the shot could have been improved alot with a pointed toe.

All that said, I love the concept and the tone of the images. Thanks for posting them.

-Karen

Hi Jeremy
just realist you could only cut 1 inch at left side of the picture and the problem with the to strong arm would be handeld!
Because the rest is wonderfull sexy!