Beach Dereliction

Taken on a Sunday walk along the beach front.

I am attracted to derelict and disused buildings and thought the pattern worked here.

Any comments welcome

Phill
Location
Not so Great Yarmouth
Equipment Used
Nikon F80 50mm
Exposure
1/60 @ f5.6
Film & Developer
FP4 in Pyrocat-HD
Paper & Developer
Neg scan
Phill, I think that the pattern works better, for me, if the image is cropped at the left edge of the vertical partition. I think that the left hand brightness competes with the pattern to the point of distracting from the image.
 
A real "trompe l'oeil". Great.
 
Love the Photo phil the only thing that bothers me and I'm a nit pik. So take it with a grain sand is the out of focus in the lower left area. unless it is the scan.
 
The subtle lighting accentuates the diagonal bottom left to top right started by the line of the wall. Nice. Very nice.
 

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