Barn Swallows
ernie51

Barn Swallows

First upload. Had to wait for swallows to fly into view.Comments greatly appreciated.
Location
Michigan
Equipment Used
Pentax 645n 80-160 zoom
Exposure
unavailable
Film & Developer
t-max
Paper & Developer
kodak ploymax FB DW Matt
Lens Filter
Red
This is a beautiful print... but why did you wait for the swallows?? I'd have liked it better without them! :smile: That great sky, the barn & it's tree and that fence remnant make a nice picture!
 
Jeanette, Thanks for the nice comments. I also shot without the birds. I guess your right in that the birds may detract from the overall image but I did like the "hallo" of swallows. dennis
 
Bruce, In my original print I did burn in the upper left corner, but it does not seem as effective in the scan. Thanks for the comment...Dennis
 
Without the name, the subject for me would have been the barn. Is this the emphasis you intended?
 
The swallows transforms this photo into something special. Without them the shot would have been pretty good but with them the image has more tension and more interest.
 

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ernie51
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swallows.jpg
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