I really love this in the thumbnail but less so in the bigger version, due to the over softness. I love the composition and everything about it, and not knowing anything about the process here I think it looks better in a sharper less "foggy" version. I love your processes in some of your more quirky work but less so in some of the more literal or vanilla stuff. This picture to me has incredible potential but having never done pinhole photography not sure of your options.