Another weekend at Mill Creek

We got out and camped at the Hickey Gap campground that weekend. It was very cold and drizzly, a few minutes after I shot these frames it started snowing briefly.
Location
Mill Creek, Hickey Gap campground
Equipment Used
4x5 Anba Ikeda, 150mm Caltar
Exposure
1 sec @ f/22
Film & Developer
Tri-X Rodinal 1:50 reduced agitation
Paper & Developer
Oriental Seagull G4 Dektol
A very nice photo. You might wish to trim the print along the top and eliminate the flare from the brightly lit background. I would also print a grade softer paper so that your blacks are not so intense.
 
Another nice one. I agree with Claire, cropping the top would help. Either burning in the bright water on the left or cropping the left up to the tree will eliminate a distracting bright area at the edge of the image.
 

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