Aniella

Nice looking girl. I would like to see a catchlight in her eyes, they look dead to me.

Gary

I have no trouble with the eyes and I like the whole composition

hmm, I see a catchlight in both eyes. Very nice subtle variations in tonality

I don't see a "catch Light" on my monitor, but with or with out, it is still a very nice photograph. The composition does cause me some bother with the arm and hand leading up and out of the frame. The hand should not be brighter than the face.

Charlie.........................

I see a "catch light" on my screen. Very nice photo, what's in the lower right hand corner, looks interesting?
Well done! ?developer.

Remarkable portrait of a really cute girl, this has a sort of whimsical feel to it. Well done.

On the technical side I can see the catchlights in her eyes(not sure it matters). I would consider dodging her right eye slightly when you print. Nice work. Shawn