Alone in woods

Alone in woods

I'd seen this tree in the summer months and thought I should return after snowfall. I had a difficult time printing this one. I cropped the sky as I thought i was way too bright. I am somewhat pleased with the result but feel it's lacking something. Suggestions for improvement would be appreciated.
Location
IL
Equipment Used
toyo 4x5 210mm geronar
Exposure
2 sec @ f45
Film & Developer
320txp
Paper & Developer
mgiv
Lens Filter
none
Mike, I like the peaceful feeling of the photograph. I think the tree trunks on the far left and right of the frame box in the image a bit. Delicate burning of the areas surrounding the subject tree, perhaps with a low contrast filter, might help pop it out a bit. If the burns are feathered in from the edges, it might create a greater sense of depth.
All the best,
Daniel
 
I agree with Daniel, you want to get the subject tree to pop just a bit with some careful burning around the tree.You might also crop out the two trees on the left and right. They seem a bit distracting, pulling my eyes away from the subject tree. Nice quiet image.
 
I'm not sure I agree with the suggestion of cropping the trees at the edges of the neg - they add to the sense of this little tree being "surrounded" by the larger trees. Either approach would work, I think, but the "mood" of the image would be substantially different.

You might try split filtration, using a lower contrast for the overall exposure to bring out more detail in the trunks, dodging a bit on the central tree, and then burn-in the central tree a bit with a higher contrast to get the "pop".
 
Thank you all for your input. When I initially set up this shot I considered eliminating the left and right trees from the frame. however, as Ralph said, i thought including them would help emphasize the clearing.

I think I will try all of your suggestions though and see what happens. Thanks again for your help!

Happy holidays
Mike
 
Caught this in random images. Another tree picture. With snow. Yay. Very delicate. Nice.
 

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