After a shower.....

After a shower.....

One studio flash and a reflector. The original fibre print has better separation in the blacks
Equipment Used
Mamiya 645
Film & Developer
Ilford Delta 100 + AM74
Paper & Developer
Forte PWT + AM6006 + Goldtone
Nice expression from your model, but I think the flash-light; especially on her face is to hard.
 
Interesting concept. I find one thing puzzling: her left shoulder seems to be MUCH lower than her right shoulder in the full-sized image. This is much less pronounced in the smaller thumbnails. I think that my be an effect of different "black separation" in the larger image. I would love to see this image on the FB paper.
 
This shoulder thing makes it confusing to me, not even the 3 stars can help me on it!
Could you not scan it with better separation?
Its otherwise a nice shoot and girl!
Armin
 

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