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C&O Canal - Georgetown, Washington, DC, Spring 2006
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Church Presentation
First Pt/Pd print
Jose A Martinez

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I have some serious doubts about this image. I like it, but I think that the girl at the left as is staring at me "ruins" the spontaneous feeling of a "snap shot". As you can see the image is blur because I followed the action and wait until the frame please me, but at the very moment I decided to press the button she turns to the camera. I think that this action could make the photo more interesting, or ruin it. What you think?
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Location
New York
Equipment Used
Leica MP, 28 mm Elmarit M, Leica flash
Exposure
f/8 @ 1/30 sec
Film & Developer
Tri X, D76 1:1
Paper & Developer
Ilford MG IV FB, Dektol
Thomas Bertilsson
I think it works!

- Thom
 
JBrunner
Are you kidding me? Utterly spontaneous. Look at that Mona Lisa!!! The look, this particular look, takes an everyday street shot, and gives it life, the universe, everything.
 
I like it. I think, if she was not looking at the camera it would be kind of boring.
 
I like the eye contact. I agree it's spontaneous. I also like the 'not cross' in between the girls.
 

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memny0602-04.jpg
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Date taken
Mon, 17 July 2006 5:50 PM
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