Abandoned Van
MarkL

Abandoned Van

Equipment Used
Nikkor-W 150mm
Film & Developer
Tri-X + HC110
Paper & Developer
MGIV + Dektol
In my opinion, the dark edges that surround the image do not add anything. In fact, they detract...making it look like a Holga (ugh!) print. A straight print would be far more interesting.
Morry Katz - Lethbridge, Canada
 
I was just thinking about what a great idea the dark edges are. They really draw one into the center while instilling a very early primitive quality to the image which works very well with the subject. Very well done.
 
the subject calls for more vignetting please! burn in the bottoms and sides too! :smile: that makes this print more appear older than it is. I like it.
 
I'd like to see the burn more even as Perry suggests, but not as dark, Leave some detail in the grass like this has on the right edge. I like the tones in the truck.
 
I LIKE THE VIGNETTING!
 

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abandoned_van.jpg
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Date taken
Mon, 16 November 2009 8:41 AM
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750px x 592px

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