Love this!!! The light on teddy is lovely, and the kids in the background are perfect. Although, I think as is, the photograph gives context to the place, the day, the weather... all that. But., you might try a version where you crop out the sky and water. It would, I think, emphasize teddy's abandonment.
Yes, great work!
For me, I like the crop as is. The children have their backs turned on the teddy and the context shows us how small and insignificant the the bear has become to them. And yes, the light on the bear is perfect.
Keep posting,
James