A Study of Line

I tend ot overexpose my shots. So I adjusted in MSPE. (I've rationalized this called modern darkroom technique). Is this shot too busy, should I step in closer on a particular level? What lens to use? Filter?
Location
Phoenix, Arizona, U.S.A.
Equipment Used
Olympus OM-1 MD
Film & Developer
Fuji 100 - Costco
Paper & Developer
Fuji Crystal Archive-Costco
I forgot to mention that the lens used was the G.Zuiko Auto-S 1:1.4 50mm. MSPE(Microsoft Photo Editor).
 
Here is the original image uncropped. p.s. the image printed looks better than the negative scan...I wonder why.
 
inserting images in comments (must use a host site) doesn't work for me. anyway...no magneta on original. but does that mean the picture compisition etc. works for you?
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