A little better...

hi eddie
it looks better than the last time
its like night and day !
looking forward to the next
john

looks better yes.A hint?when you apply with brush, then first make horizontal - then vertican (or visa versa) strokes. Then - when you feel the emulsion starts to set (be careful not to wat too long..) then finish with diagonal light strokes.Reason: IF you have brush strokes show, then almost all images "handle" diagonal lines well. Here you have horizontal strokes, but a vertical form. They will tend to fight a little..Makes sense?Have fun. As long as there is improvement, then all is good!

I used a brush for the second coat. I went over the rolled coat, from last time. Next time, it's a brush for all of the coating. Running low on the emulsion. I need to order the Foma...