6:54 in Ardmore

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  • f/16
Central park(not the one in NY)
Location
Ardmore Oklahoma
Equipment Used
Minolta Maxxum 7000i, Minolta 35-105mm
Film & Developer
FP4 @ ISO 125, DD-X
Lens Filter
#15 deep yellow
It's a decent picture although I'd probably straighten it up a bit. When I say decent I mean it's handled competently and traditionally. BUT I'd be very tempted to take it from the ordinary to something more. I'd be tempted to straighten it and crop it square removing it's base. To me it's far too "literal" and by cropping it, it becomes "stranger" more interesting, thought provoking and open to interpretation as to what you are saying. I think we often get caught in taking "what is there" instead of making a statement or personalizing a picture. We should try to take every picture in a new way, because the way you've taken it, although very competent, is too postcard, too "normal".
 

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