#2 is a lot more evenly lit, and to me more successful. The shaded part of your face in this one is a little too dark, in my opinion. Perhaps this setup with more reflection on the shaded half?
How are you liking the Foma 400 sheet film?
I like this one. The other one is much better for facial recognition. (read mug shot ;-) Hope your of good humor today. I'd even pay for one that good of myself.