Sort of a slice of life picture but in my opinion you need to try to get sort of a statement on some of these rather than just an "I was there" vibe to them. The problem I see in this one is of all the people had been staring at the two on the right because they were Hasidic Jews it would have been sort of a statement, but since they are all Hasidic, it seems like nothing more than school getting out and nothing really happening.