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For starters, it's overly blue, was it underexposed? Could it be bad processing?
The color balance is off. Also use a longer lenses to get less distortion.
What is it that you don't like about your picture? If it is the converging vertical lines, that is normally caused by pointing the camera up. It is more pronounced with wide angle lenses like your 28mm. You can avoid it by keeping the camera level front to back so that the film plane is vertical and therefore parallel to the walls of the house. The problem can be that you don't get the full height of the building in the frame. A higher viewpoint would help, but may not have been possible. You can get a Perspective Control or Shift lens that helps, but they are expensive, and not really necessary unless you specialise in architecture. I'm not sure about the colour of your image. It looks a bit blue.
"I think you have made a good job of isolating the subject."
Alex.
Every house is situated so that a certain time of day is perfect for it and perhaps not for neighboring houses. You might give that a thought. Personally, I'd shoot it in black and white being an olde house and all.
My guess guess is that the problem is a combination of poor processing and poor scanning. Here is your pic with a few tweaks.
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