Graphic is great but I need more pictures to see if it works into the serie. "Urban pattern is my trip too, so we speak the same language...
Sometime it's good to NOT listen the mixed reactions. Continue on your serie and at one point everything will make sense.
(about the print, you maybe need more texture on the white. It's certainly good on the real print...but on my screen it's too much white.)
All the best.
I think you have a good idea/concept going here, but I feel that these images really need to be seen as a group, together. This image is very simple, and somewhat boring, but when put into the complete series it might peice together parts of the whole. Keep posting more and keep us updated on the progression of the series! Best of luck!