Miss Chandee
joeyk49

Miss Chandee

Taken during a recent weekender to Calabash, North Carolina. The shrimp and fishing boats pull up to the docks where the, you guessed it, seafood restaurants are.

I'm still muddling my way through printing. This one is bedeviling me. Exposure mistakes are probably to blame for some of my frustration. Any pointers would be appreciated. Specifically, the light band across the top of the print is bothering me. What may have caused this? Its not on the negative...
Location
Calabash, NC USA
Equipment Used
Minolta 450si; Sigma 28-80mm
Exposure
Sorry, unrecorded; somewhere in the area of f5.6 @125 ish
Film & Developer
Delta 400@320; Perceptol
Paper & Developer
Ilford MGIV & Dektol 1:3
Lens Filter
Yellow
Filter mave have been a Cir-P. I was switching back and forth that hazy day.
 
g'day Joey
a great subject and well seen, but i could suggest a couple of things to improve the image

firstly, the white band may be caused by uneven print development, i doubt a polariser would cause that effect, but why use a polariser on such an overcast day

secondly, your too close to the boat, or cropped too tightly

thirdly, the black post on the left is too large, obvious and blurry and doesn't add anything to the subject

lastly, and most obviously, the print is muddy, its needs more contrast
 
Thanks Ray, Tony.

Yeah, that piling does kinda stick you in the eye, doesn't it....there was no way to get it out of the shot without getting wet.

There's a little more contrast to the print. The scan isn't really very good; but I agree. My first print was with a #2 contrast filter and it was terrible! This one's with a #3.

This was my first time using Dektol at 1:3. Perhaps, my next session will be back at 1:1.

Thanks for your help.

Joe
 
This may be way off the mark but I recently did some prints with similar light marks on the edges. The problem was simply using developer that had aged too much. I use a Nova 4 slot processor. Overall the prints weren't too bad until I compared them those done in fresh developer. I use a B&W analyser based on a test print and which required the probe setting to be almost double what is normally needed, resulting in a very long exposure.

If I did B&W prints every week, I'd have spotted the problem but because 90% of the the prints weren't bad, I was blind to the most likely cause.
 
Too much of the blurrrry post, pile, whatever you call them in your neck of the woods.
 

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