I love the low tones in this photograph, but again another close up with foreground out of focus. the first thing my eye goes to is the forground being out of focus. I know with the twin lens cameras that has to be very hard to do. But the image is still great.
I appreciate your input. In fact, exactly that issue was what promtpted me to move to large format. I have a lot of confidence in my seeing and was tired of not having the image control I needed to make the prints I saw in my head. I can now though. I'll be posting some of my LF work shortly.