Desi Wind Copy

there are big windows to the right that I augmented with strobe. I wanted the windows to be the guiding light.
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Fuji 6x8
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Delta 100 120
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Ilford MG FB
I like this. The only issue, for me, is the angled pole which is behind her right shoulder. I think, without it, the black would have framed her better. There's also such nice separation between the figure, and the white panel behind her, which is obscured by the pole. I do think the set & light are great. A nicely constructed image.
 
For my taste a bit much on one pic, I would crop left and right and I think it would improve!
Normaly I really like your compositions but maybe its just the wrong day for me!

Cheers Armin
 
Looks like westons work
 
Thanks for the comments!! Armin, this image is not so much about the figure as it about the space and how the light just glows inside the space during certain times of the day. The components of the image have a randomness to them as if they are just there by chance. The models "pose" is very closed in on herself just enough I think to distract the viewer back to the light. Thanks again for looking!
 

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