daisy for a girl
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Edit: crop to square. The funny thing is, before I shot the image, I thought about making it square.. but when I first tried cropping the negative, it wasn't working for me.. anyways, I played around, because I knew the top of the uncropped image was weak (I had left it there because I wanted it to fit into a certain frame..). Anyways, squared the image, had a new frame made..

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Fabriano paper, ammonium chloride, pottasium citrate and silver nitrate.

My scanner is soft, but I chose to leave the image unsharpened.
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Film & Developer
Adox PL100, D76
Paper & Developer
Fabriano Artistico 140lb HP
Thank you! I've been considering re-shooting with what I feel is a stronger composition. :smile:
(I'd rather not crop a 4x5 contact print :tongue:)
 
jovo
Perhaps another POV might be stronger, but I love the festival of triangles going on in this one...it's fun to keep changing my mind about which is the negative space and which isn't. The light/dark values are fun too!
 
clogz
Very nice. Strong composition. Have you got any more?


Hans
 
Thomas Bertilsson
That is nicely seen! Contrast really works well here. Since this is the critique forum, I suggest a slight crop off the top (to about a square image) for better interplay between the flower and its shadow. I thought 'yin and yang' when I saw this photograph.

- Thom
 

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