Barns

Barns

Barns; probably used in the past to store hay and seed, now left to silently decay.

Constructive critique on composition, printing etc is most welcome!
Location
Sweden
Equipment Used
Wista 45 DX
Film & Developer
FP4+ or HP5+, don´t remember.
Paper & Developer
Ilford Classic wth Moersch Eco 4812. Split toned in sepia + selenium
Nice! I love steelyard composition.

Personally, I'd have also tried it so the road ran from where it does now to about where the left of those small barns are. So take a couple steps forward and right. Just to see a little more of an angled leading line pointing to the right side. Not so much that the houses or trees in the back are out of the frame, though, as you have three pairs, which is great.

That said, I like this one already because of the mirroring -- two barns in the back sort of replaying the two bars in the front -- so it is really nice as it is. My suggestion may not have been better. Good sky, too.

It's a beautiful print. And I really like the toning for this scene.
 

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Device
NIKON CORPORATION NIKON D300
Aperture
ƒ/5.6
Focal length
50.0 mm
Exposure time
1/30 second(s)
ISO
200
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lador_söftesmåla_1920x1080_sRGB_(_DSC8431).jpg
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Date taken
Tue, 30 August 2022 9:36 PM
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1078px x 1080px

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