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Transquility

Transquility

A swampy piece of land, early in the morning. The sun soon rises and the mist has begun to quietly leave the scene.

I wanted to capture the very quiet mood of the scene, I am not sure I succeed?
Constructive critique on choice of subject, composition, printing, etc is most welcome!
Location
Sweden
Equipment Used
Wista Field 45 DX-II
Film & Developer
Adox CHS-II
Looks pretty tranquil to me. The horizontal line of the fallen log makes a nice counterpoint to the vertical trees.
 
The log is like a gigantic stick insect crawling through the woods.
I have not seen this before, but you are absolutely right! Reminds me of when I was a kid and had a jar with a stick insect that eventually got loose and reproduced itself, leaving the whole house full of creeps, to my mom's great horror.
I have this print framed and hanging on the wall; will from now on look at it with two completely different set of eyes.

Thanks for your comments!
 
Normally such dark partial trunks such you have on the right can be a distraction. In this case I am surprised at how well it holds the image together instead.
Perhaps a little heavy on the burning on the top of the image. A little less would open up the feeling of the light and mists, but it is a matter of your intentions. Right now, my eyes are nicely drawn along the 'horizon' where it is lighter behind the trees. Lightening the upper portion would give more of a look of the light descending. Just a slightly different 'feel'. One might be able to get both.
 
Very nice.......it has a very soft feel to it and I think the tonal scale is generally nicely represented given the lighting conditions. I probably would be tinkering with that foreground log to see if I could raise its value a bit on the areas where no bark is........but I really like it.
 
A beautiful image that is a dead tree laying before funeral congregation trees still standing.
 

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NIKON CORPORATION NIKON D300
Aperture
ƒ/5.6
Focal length
50.0 mm
Exposure time
1/10 second(s)
ISO
200
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(_DSC8185)_Kyrkö_mosse_1920x1080_sRGB.jpg
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1 MB
Date taken
Thu, 06 May 2021 10:46 AM
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